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学员mika999: P36 4 Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997,peaked at 25% in 1997,and then droped of sports games droped by 10% in 1996,remained steady in 1996 and 1997,but increased by 5% in of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997,and then recovered in 1998.老师回复:Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997应该用不同的词来表述GO UP,peaked at 25% in 1997,and then droped of sports games droped by 10% in 1996,remained steady in 1996 and 1997,but increased by 5% in of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997,and then recovered in 1998. 表达很清楚,非常不错不足之处是应该用不同的上升和下降的词汇表达一个词汇用几遍显得很罗嗦,建议改正

学员mika999: P36 4
Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997,peaked at 25% in 1997,and then droped of sports games droped by 10% in 1996,remained steady in 1996 and 1997,but increased by 5% in of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997,and then recovered in 1998.

老师回复:Sales of adventure games increased steadily from 1995 to of action games increased steadily from 1995 to 1997应该用不同的词来表述GO UP,peaked at 25% in 1997,and then droped of sports games droped by 10% in 1996,remained steady in 1996 and 1997,but increased by 5% in of other games remained steady in 1995 and 1996 before a slight drop in 1997,and then recovered in 1998.
表达很清楚,非常不错
不足之处是应该用不同的上升和下降的词汇表达
一个词汇用几遍显得很罗嗦,建议改正

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